THE TIGER'S ROAR..........

With his or her words to reign
Empty mind gone to drain
People did try to strain
Bold and courage had the pain.

They took methods up so bad
Brave warriors hit the sack
Evil rule no dignity they had
As a ball that hit we bounce back!

A new world order grows up front
A slow hymn grows to a chant
Blending together like thorns on rose
To crush evil together we rose!

Led up front by the mystic saint
He held our hearts fed our vein
The enigma of life to raise as giant
To dethrone evil, the British reign!

The bold warriors fought for bread
We won last shed no blood
Lost again back they row
We won the game with the tiger's roar!

THE NEW PATH................

Daring prince to lead my path

Gusty wind to bear my wrath

To seek pride i walk my route

Swing my way through roots and shoots.

Awakened cry a hell of song

My heart fro back, ding n dong

Creepy justice all to give

Kill my lies for am to live!

Lonely swings to hammer along

Yellow flame (sun) to burn my song 

Blackened ridge (death) closing in

Have to jump or dive in. (dive in-jump into explore the blackness and horror of life)

Twists n turns won't turn my path

Leading my heart with the warrior i got

Blockades or hustles won't block me down

To give up am not a clown!

Exploding heart

The king of dreams wakes up high
He grows along hitting my eye
He grows along with the sorrow i have
He grows for, he knows am knave.

My position here grows dreaming down
My heart owns a thorn fed crown
Hey men hear me
I write smiles for thee n thee.

It's valor for i write my views
Don't have fed up thoughts for screaming views
I have a heart that's humble and cold
If i can i'll turn the world.

No one gives me a chance to leap
It's sorrow and torture all i reap
To turn the tables i change my line
My words and works will hit your vine!

DREAMER

A humble heart trying to
Be with you all day
Craving for only you
Day and night to lead my way!

You're the world which pleasures i seek
Craving thy marble stone
You'r the world and am a geek
Swirling lone and lone!

You're the breeze to lead my way
On a windy night profound
You're my life my night n day
My heart lost and found!

You're the precious gem i stare
My whole life long
You're the lovely beast i dare
To share my path along!

Am a heart trying to
Be with you all day
Am a soul which craves to
Spare a day, with the flowers of may!

THE ONE EYED SOUL........ HORROR LAND-4

It's a man? a creepy thing

Lonely words seem they sing

It's huge creepy, high and tall

From its hair bats they fall.

Sweats back, wretched place

Still have guts to look it's face

Still unknown what it has

My heart panics, stubborn lass!.

See a girl stuck up alive

The devil besides springing live

Cornering her it got her hard

Aiming her like a poison dart.

Now my mind force to help

No my leg panics to move

A broken voice loud i yelp

"Don't stand there, Move!"

Wretched thing saw me back

Short stood there with raging pulse

With blood in eyes up it sprang

Nearing me with its damn white fang.

My legs were quick moved me side
My legs spread out far too wide 

One eyed soul hit a stone

With darkened death in, it's eyes shown.

The victim there stands up front

Does she panics to be my friend?

With gleaming eyes held out my hand

With the devil dead, we shook our hands!

Happy that i won't be lone

Mysteries are we seek to find

Thrashing our ways through blood and bone

With fear ahead our hands they bind!

Just escaped a mere death shot

Joining hands with the partner i got

Still unknown the mysteries home

With hope behind we still roam...........................

TO BE CONTINUED......................................

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113) a friend forever

A blooming sun under i retire
The gloomy tree which i despair
To hold on to our dreamy past
Get back to the days i lost.

Smiling tune down my spine
Sends me tears along my spine
Your my blood, the river of life
Your my bread, my mortal strife.

Flowing along our kinship dash
Making our chanted dreams now crash
Together we melt, unity alike
Forever we bind, you and me a like!

Sides of coins not to be torn
Two mortals in a soul, that's how born
You are my aim, the heavenly gate
You bring me fame, every date!

Gave me honors, joy and pride
Made a platform, goals set side
You are the one i dream to live
You are the heart, thy soul you give!

Thou a mystic, a great friend
The only word my heart bend
A fable tale our hearts swirl
A blooming flower, the red whorl!

(meaning of the last line- you are the brightest whorl in a blooming flower!) <