THE TIGER'S ROAR..........

With his or her words to reign
Empty mind gone to drain
People did try to strain
Bold and courage had the pain.

They took methods up so bad
Brave warriors hit the sack
Evil rule no dignity they had
As a ball that hit we bounce back!

A new world order grows up front
A slow hymn grows to a chant
Blending together like thorns on rose
To crush evil together we rose!

Led up front by the mystic saint
He held our hearts fed our vein
The enigma of life to raise as giant
To dethrone evil, the British reign!

The bold warriors fought for bread
We won last shed no blood
Lost again back they row
We won the game with the tiger's roar!

THE NEW PATH................

Daring prince to lead my path

Gusty wind to bear my wrath

To seek pride i walk my route

Swing my way through roots and shoots.

Awakened cry a hell of song

My heart fro back, ding n dong

Creepy justice all to give

Kill my lies for am to live!

Lonely swings to hammer along

Yellow flame (sun) to burn my song 

Blackened ridge (death) closing in

Have to jump or dive in. (dive in-jump into explore the blackness and horror of life)

Twists n turns won't turn my path

Leading my heart with the warrior i got

Blockades or hustles won't block me down

To give up am not a clown!

Exploding heart

The king of dreams wakes up high
He grows along hitting my eye
He grows along with the sorrow i have
He grows for, he knows am knave.

My position here grows dreaming down
My heart owns a thorn fed crown
Hey men hear me
I write smiles for thee n thee.

It's valor for i write my views
Don't have fed up thoughts for screaming views
I have a heart that's humble and cold
If i can i'll turn the world.

No one gives me a chance to leap
It's sorrow and torture all i reap
To turn the tables i change my line
My words and works will hit your vine!

DREAMER

A humble heart trying to
Be with you all day
Craving for only you
Day and night to lead my way!

You're the world which pleasures i seek
Craving thy marble stone
You'r the world and am a geek
Swirling lone and lone!

You're the breeze to lead my way
On a windy night profound
You're my life my night n day
My heart lost and found!

You're the precious gem i stare
My whole life long
You're the lovely beast i dare
To share my path along!

Am a heart trying to
Be with you all day
Am a soul which craves to
Spare a day, with the flowers of may!

THE ONE EYED SOUL........ HORROR LAND-4

It's a man? a creepy thing

Lonely words seem they sing

It's huge creepy, high and tall

From its hair bats they fall.

Sweats back, wretched place

Still have guts to look it's face

Still unknown what it has

My heart panics, stubborn lass!.

See a girl stuck up alive

The devil besides springing live

Cornering her it got her hard

Aiming her like a poison dart.

Now my mind force to help

No my leg panics to move

A broken voice loud i yelp

"Don't stand there, Move!"

Wretched thing saw me back

Short stood there with raging pulse

With blood in eyes up it sprang

Nearing me with its damn white fang.

My legs were quick moved me side
My legs spread out far too wide 

One eyed soul hit a stone

With darkened death in, it's eyes shown.

The victim there stands up front

Does she panics to be my friend?

With gleaming eyes held out my hand

With the devil dead, we shook our hands!

Happy that i won't be lone

Mysteries are we seek to find

Thrashing our ways through blood and bone

With fear ahead our hands they bind!

Just escaped a mere death shot

Joining hands with the partner i got

Still unknown the mysteries home

With hope behind we still roam...........................

TO BE CONTINUED......................................

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113) a friend forever

A blooming sun under i retire
The gloomy tree which i despair
To hold on to our dreamy past
Get back to the days i lost.

Smiling tune down my spine
Sends me tears along my spine
Your my blood, the river of life
Your my bread, my mortal strife.

Flowing along our kinship dash
Making our chanted dreams now crash
Together we melt, unity alike
Forever we bind, you and me a like!

Sides of coins not to be torn
Two mortals in a soul, that's how born
You are my aim, the heavenly gate
You bring me fame, every date!

Gave me honors, joy and pride
Made a platform, goals set side
You are the one i dream to live
You are the heart, thy soul you give!

Thou a mystic, a great friend
The only word my heart bend
A fable tale our hearts swirl
A blooming flower, the red whorl!

(meaning of the last line- you are the brightest whorl in a blooming flower!) <

THE UNDERGROUND CAVERNS............... HORROR LAND-3

Still walking lone in an unknown place
Searching my way, for a long back trace
Still unknown of the mystery behind
Somber down, away from light and shine!

Asked my heart why here so?
Go get help when i can,
But where am i, still don't know
With evil behind, i still ran!

Crawling my way through this itchy path,
Thorns and spines tear my cloth
Lone with spiders, rodents and rats
Shiver and quiver along with bats!

What i saw up front row
Got me back on my sweaty show
Now my breath's a fast sped train
God its bad! devil drenched rain!

six and eight, inches i see
Giants and monsters block my way
Spiders, tarantulas is all i see
Itching my creepy stay!

Holding back my breath i dare
They're too large; hold and stare
This lone place filled with bone
Lively men turned to stones.

My heart now panics yet to beat
Standing here on my hiding seat
Oh man! it eats men whole
Up i see an one eyed soul!

to be continued.................................

116) missing moon............. HORROR LAND-2

Still walking down with my left leg hurt
Not lone wounded praised with dirt
Night's fell and starts my bumps
Along with fear my heart now jumps!

Walking lone is blasted courage?
Or sake common this age?
The bluest night makes me shiver
What's up makes words quiver.

Ghostly specimen springs up front
Huge blood eyes, adds with long dents
Seeking me? comes too close
What i see's not some freaky shows!

Not a ghost what am glad
But can't dodge so now sad
What to do? thoughts now roam
Dipped up again in sweaty foam.

Still am far, i can run
But no moon, no flaring sun
Mind now roam escapes abroad
Starts to run, no light as guard.

Pricks and thorns torn back along
Ran now for, follows me a ghostly song
So glad now far from it
Where am i? still no guess.

No moon tonight, a black sky soars
Not known the danger found down way
Walked front down saw a door
What i saw, is in my next say! <

‎115) A lonely place.............. HORROR LAND-1

Holding breath i walk for a want
Blows and hymns, with songs to chant
New feats of glory, or facts of piece
What they get, is am to seize!

Rocking past head a dawn
Whooping's loud, creeping upon
Souls of species? howls of wolves?
Creeping upon a creepy gift!

Freaky smile, ghostly lips,
Walking along with sweaty dips
Creepy now, a snaky lair
Jackals prowl can't gasp an air.

Wooden hammocks lone they swing
Wind's fast, blackened rings
Searching for help far and near
A howling song is all i hear!

Cutting trees i walk my walk
Holding breath (it means tired) but dare to stop
Rocking heavens sling a song
Can't guess how, i'll stay along.

Up a hill dawn now smile
With miles to go i still run
Holding breath new thoughts spurts
A day is up, and have wounds that hurts!
<

44)DEEPLY IN......................

Let lose of my heart

On seeing you

Various colours jump in me

Each dancing for you, to join me,

                              WITH YOU!

number 10) BE MY FRIEND

See the stars in the night

It will make a face with such bright

Wonder it's who?

of course it's you!

be my friend!

LOVE (part-2)

Love's a world, love's a cry
Love's a sin, that makes me die
Love today, i love to night
Love's my heart, with love i fight!

Loved the time, loved you my mind
Loved the day with you
Love's so hard, i don't mind
Still yanking to be with you!

Loved my love, love made me blind
Love's not so hard to find
My life now, a new path to go
Loved your way, loved you my heart, love is what i show!

Love to show, loved to play
Loved you, my sunny day
Loved a blame, love's not a shame
Love i try to tame!

Search for you with love i have
Love did grasp me hard!
Love a guide, with love i drive
Love a broken heart!

I thrive for you, poured my love
Love's a thirst i quenched
Loved a life, love a knife
With love am killed and drenched!

Love your heart, love's my part
Love's not hard to find
Loved your part, loved you my art
Love's so sweet and kind!

Searched my ways out of love
But nothing did i find
Love's my way, love you my day
A girl was in my mind!

With love i have' broke my heart
Love i search and fond
My eyes shed, tears of my heart
Love's filled with you my mind!

A way to go, yet no rain
With love i cry and cry
With love now my life drain
But still i cry and cry....................

STITCHES IN MY HEART

On my soul, from a heart of love
Lost my world to you
Buried my heart with no one to share,
My pleasant dreams of you!

Above me are my words of love
Inscribed for a heart of you
Hatred and sorrow now burns me alive
Everyone watched me cry.

Left alone with none to share my soul
I lie on this throne
Studded with thorns
But still am happy for you!

I lost my world, my heart that loves
Left aside with tears
Let all this world cry for me
Only to show that am always yours!

HAVE LOST YOU

Lonely am i now
On my soul stitches been made
Shared my heart with something new
Taught me it's own way!

You're on my heart
On my soul, but have lost you,
Uttering words spoke by me,
EACH STILL SEARCHING FOR YOU! 

SILENT MEADOW

A garden of a special dream
Shouted hard till i'd scream
Closed my eyes to find a star
Jumped hard, but it's still far.

Lost my heart to an autumn breeze
This winter breeze made me freeze
Loved this place, eyes can't guess
Beauty touching, words can't confess!

Beauty so deep, i can't reach
Majesty so touching, i can't preach
Nature's dignity down on a stream
Beauty glows as am in a dream!

Walking lone am full of pride
Walking with nature down my side
Hoped to come back to this majestic art
Did leave you with tears in my heart!



A poem that changed my writing style! till this i wrote in a different way, and after this an another way!